1: PITCH
https://youtu.be/q_5ccPxQ8pA
Imagine booking your flight, packing your bags, and facing an emergency the day of your trip. You could have payed for flight insurance but you didn't. Why? Because it's too expensive. Today I have the ultimate solution to never missing your flight again. My name is Gernise Gregoire and I am the CEO of FlyFrenzy, the free app. In the market today, we have the most effective form of missed-flight prevention right through your cell phone. Just last year, Forbes reported that one out of every seven travelers has missed their flights due to long airport security lines. Let Flight Frenzy help you fly easy & never miss a flight again BUSINESS PEOPLE. So how does it work? Our FlyFrenzy App will alert you. Just download it after you book your flight. What's in it for you? You'll know how long security checkpoints will take four hours before your trip, on your way to your trip, and once you enter your designated airport. Our inclusivity agreement with your favorite airlines will give you 25% off just for downloading! That 25% profit comes back to us. So the next time you book your flight, know your security checkpoint time too and never miss a flight again! Book the flight and download it now for this exclusive offer! Thank you.
Imagine booking your flight, packing your bags, and facing an emergency the day of your trip. You could have payed for flight insurance but you didn't. Why? Because it's too expensive. Today I have the ultimate solution to never missing your flight again. My name is Gernise Gregoire and I am the CEO of FlyFrenzy, the free app. In the market today, we have the most effective form of missed-flight prevention right through your cell phone. Just last year, Forbes reported that one out of every seven travelers has missed their flights due to long airport security lines. Let Flight Frenzy help you fly easy & never miss a flight again BUSINESS PEOPLE. So how does it work? Our FlyFrenzy App will alert you. Just download it after you book your flight. What's in it for you? You'll know how long security checkpoints will take four hours before your trip, on your way to your trip, and once you enter your designated airport. Our inclusivity agreement with your favorite airlines will give you 25% off just for downloading! That 25% profit comes back to us. So the next time you book your flight, know your security checkpoint time too and never miss a flight again! Book the flight and download it now for this exclusive offer! Thank you.
Reflection of feedback:
Based on the feedback, I realized I did not dressed as appropriately as I could have. In this pitch, I changed that. I was also told to keep up with high energy, enunciate words and push the fact that the FlyFrenzy app is geared towards business people. I personally want it to be geared towards both business and young people who travel often. Based on research, Generation Zers traveling rates have spiked up over the years.
What I changed, based of feedback:
I changed how I enunciated words, dressed more appropriately, and looked much more comfortable when speaking. I also mentioned that fact that my service is for business people. That can mean it is for executives, middle managers and even young entrepreneurs and people who love to travel. My energy was much more lively and effective in my opinion!
Hi Gernise,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your pitch. You seem very confident. You know what you were doing. I watched your first pitch and I'm glad that you changed some things. It seems that you took the feedback that was provided to you and you applied it to your new pitch. I liked your business idea to. I think that if you applied what you mentioned in your solution you can make this happen! This new pitch is much better than your last one! Thank you for sharing!
Gernise,
ReplyDeleteI watched your first elevator pitch video and I was so impressed that I had to make sure I watched this one too and i'm glad I did. Not only were you clear and to the point, but you really put yourself into the video and was really able to sell the product. You described how the app would work and how to obtain it as well as showed emotion and excitement about your product which is key because if you do not sound excited to into your product, than your audience definitely will not. You even threw in some slogan type phrases which was very interesting and helped keep the audience in.